The next chapter is written, but now I'm suffering serious blockage. So I'm hoping you, my lovely readers, can give me some direction. The story is - obviously - in the winding down stage (finally...lol). What issues do you not feel have been sufficiently addressed in the story? Did I start something and forget to finish it? Have you been wondering what happened to <insert something here>? If you're so inclined, please leave a comment, and perhaps some inspiration for a slightly toasted writer.
As always, thank you for your devotion to Richie and Allegra :)
*hugs*
A first attempt Bon Jovi fan fiction. While you might find a few facts scattered here and there, it is primarily a total work of imagination. It is not my intent to disrespect the men, families or organization of Bon Jovi in any way! Thanks so much for reading!!! :o)
12 comments:
Aw no story is coming to an end?
What about their wedding? :-)
Anything more with the bishop? It was never revealed (except to the reader) that he's the one who sent Felix after Allegra. Granted he didn't want Felix to hurt her, but still.
I think the baby should come out looking just like Richie so it will stop any insecurities she has about the baby. And she should have her dream wedding. Please don't end it until after the baby is born!!!
I agree! We need a dream wedding and a baby...... and a christening........and an anniversary...basically you can't stop!! LOL!!
I'm waiting to hear what blackmail Kristofer has on Lexi!
You ask for ideas, here's quite a few:
Their dream wedding
The baby's identity, and if it's really Richie's
The baby being born
Lexi and Kristofer's relationship, and does it in turn affect David?
First anniversary
How about Allegra's parents, does Theresa ever apologize, and see Allegra's happiness?
How about Mama Joan? How does she like their relationship?
Just some ideas....
Love ya Carol! This is great story, keep it coming!!!!
HUGS! Need more ideas, just ask!
I don't want this story to end!!!!!
I definitely want to see the wedding and the baby being born and us knowing for sure who the father is.
Also, this might not be a big deal but I always wondered how Felix died and if the guys had anything to do with it.
Yeah basically what everyone else has said:
What's up with Lexi and Kristofer? and will it affect her marriage and relationship with David?
The Bishop( how and why he contacted allegra and felix and any relationship he may want to have with her)
Did Jon have some "friends" take care of Felix?
Will Therese get better and come to terms with Allegra and Richie and apologize to them and accept the relationship?
How does Joan feel about all of this? SHe hasn't really been talked about alot?
You need to have the wedding and the birth.
I agree with the others, the baby needs to come out looking like Richie (as much as a girl could look like Richie) so that there will never be any doubt as to who the father is and help Allegra vanquish her fears on the subject.
Where will they live?
What's going on with Heather? Will she accept Richie'e new family?
Depending on how far you are going with this story, maybe you should do a chapter where it's like a 1 year or 2 or even 3 years later and they are having another kid (hopefully a boy that looks like a mini Richie)
I will be sad when it ends....but...*giggles*
As much as I would love for you to wrapped everything up in a nice little bow, it would be nice if somethings were left unsaid, so if you decided to every revisit Richie & Allegra you can do it then..
Oh just let us know what's up with Lexi & Kirstofer
Thanks again for sharing your story with us...Much Love :)
Lets see... Whats up with Lexi and Kristofer? Will she and David get married?
How about David being baby's Godfather?
Uh, yeah the bishop...what happened there? Will there be a relationship?
I'm so sad this will be ending soon but I guess all good hings come to an end.
This is one of the best stories I've ever read and first of all I want to congratulate you for your writing: You are an excelent writter!!!
Done that, there is one issue that, from my point of view, needs more explanation: the bishop. What happen with him? Where is Allegra's Cross and why he hadn't gave it back to fer if obviously it belongs to her? Did he took care of Felix or what happen to him? .... Thank you for writing it!!!!!
Looks like everyone else posted story lines I was thinking about but never got to post here for you.
My firs reaction is NO!!!! this story can not end. I love it and your writing style and always want more and more.
If you want the story to go on for ever you can always have the kids grow up. Ava learning to drive and the good bad and ugly with her learning from Richie..... Dating prom and so on until marriage (How long do you want this story to go.... or wait??? ANOTHER story? hehehe)
Seriously, Bishop. Felix, Jon's hit men, David and Lexi and that story with Kristofer. Having it be a problem (and resolution) before the wedding (not sure which wedding) Is her mom any better? Will she be at the wedding? Will she accept the baby and the marriage. What will they do if she does not accept the marriage and the possible devastation of not having mom at the ceremony. Joan could start input over that. The birth of the baby? Is it Richie's. Another child a boy who will carry on the Sambora name.
Think we all are giving great ideas. Hope you find some that will work for you.
Great story. looking forward to next installment
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